Post by darkhelmet on Mar 7, 2004 17:35:12 GMT -5
(Here is a Star Wars story that I just wrote this morning. Hope ya like it! Keep in mind that they are in space and not on the water. It takes place sometime during the Old Republic before the Empire.)
Treedo walked up to the transport ship's pilot. "Is everything okay?" the Rodian asked?
"Everything seems okay. Not a Space Pirate in sight," said the pilot.
"Good. I'm very glad to hear that. We do not want pirates attacking us. Especially with one hundred people on board this ship. Call me if something troubling happens," said Treedo. "Even pirates can be a problem for a Jedi Knight.
The Rodian walked into his room and took a seat. He got a glass out and poured some water into it. Suddenly, the ship began to shake and Treedo dropped his glass on the ground. It smashed into pieces and
water was all over the floor.
Treedo quickly stood up. He was about to go out of the door when a Republic Soldier burst into his room.
"We are being attacked by pirates!" he shouted in a scared and nervous tone. "I don't think we will be able to hold them! They just came out of no where! Our pilot sent a distress signal to the Republic but, they won't get here in time and our soldiers are too few! I don't think we are going to make it to Corellia alive!
"Calm down," said Treedo. "We are going to have to try and hold them. Tell our men to get all of the passengers to a safe place and have some of our soldiers guard them. We do not want to loose any travelers. The rest of the men will be needed to fight. Now go and hurry!"
The Republic Soldier quickly did as the Jedi had told him. Treedo then walked over to the door where you enter into the ship with twelve other soldiers.
The ship wobbled a bit. The pirate's vessel had attached itself to the transport and they were getting ready to board it. Banging was heard on the other side of the door. Treedo pulled out his duel green lightsabers and turned them on. The Troops made their
ready stance and took aim at the door.
Suddenly, the door fell down and pirates could be seen on the other side. The Republic opened fire taking down a few of the pirates. They have an advantage over the pirates because the door is very small.
For a long time, it looked as if the pirates were never going to make it through. Blaster shots were flying everywhere! A smaller pirate fell. While he was on the ground, he pulled out a Thermal Detonator and threw it at the soldiers.
"Watch Out!" exclaimed Treedo. It was too late. The grenade exploded and it took six soldiers with it. Right after the explosion, smoke came up making it hard to see. The Space Pirates entered the ship firing their blasters. One of them sliced a Republic Soldier with his Vibroblade.
The rest of the soldiers retreated. Now the only person left was Treedo. He used a force power on himself that absorbs blaster fire for a little amount of time. A pirate swung his Vibroblade at Treedo. He deflected it with one of his lightsabers and then cut off the man's head with the other one. Blaster shots were being shot at Treedo. He was deflecting them right back at the enemy. Then he used Force Push and knocked down three pirates.
The fight is a long one and Treedo is getting very tired. It looks hopeless. Finally, the rest of the Republic soldiers came to help out the Jedi. They started blasting the Space Pirates to the ground. Eventually, the enemy retreated into their vessel and took off. They were about to get away when some Republic Fighters came to the transport ship's aid! Blaster shots were seen flying across space. One of the fighters hit the vessel and it blew up into small pieces.
After the battle was over, everyone on the transport ship was celebrating. There was food and drinks that the people donated. The whole ship thanked Treedo for what he had done. Everyone arrived at Corellia safely!
(So, what did ya all think? Any good?)
Treedo walked up to the transport ship's pilot. "Is everything okay?" the Rodian asked?
"Everything seems okay. Not a Space Pirate in sight," said the pilot.
"Good. I'm very glad to hear that. We do not want pirates attacking us. Especially with one hundred people on board this ship. Call me if something troubling happens," said Treedo. "Even pirates can be a problem for a Jedi Knight.
The Rodian walked into his room and took a seat. He got a glass out and poured some water into it. Suddenly, the ship began to shake and Treedo dropped his glass on the ground. It smashed into pieces and
water was all over the floor.
Treedo quickly stood up. He was about to go out of the door when a Republic Soldier burst into his room.
"We are being attacked by pirates!" he shouted in a scared and nervous tone. "I don't think we will be able to hold them! They just came out of no where! Our pilot sent a distress signal to the Republic but, they won't get here in time and our soldiers are too few! I don't think we are going to make it to Corellia alive!
"Calm down," said Treedo. "We are going to have to try and hold them. Tell our men to get all of the passengers to a safe place and have some of our soldiers guard them. We do not want to loose any travelers. The rest of the men will be needed to fight. Now go and hurry!"
The Republic Soldier quickly did as the Jedi had told him. Treedo then walked over to the door where you enter into the ship with twelve other soldiers.
The ship wobbled a bit. The pirate's vessel had attached itself to the transport and they were getting ready to board it. Banging was heard on the other side of the door. Treedo pulled out his duel green lightsabers and turned them on. The Troops made their
ready stance and took aim at the door.
Suddenly, the door fell down and pirates could be seen on the other side. The Republic opened fire taking down a few of the pirates. They have an advantage over the pirates because the door is very small.
For a long time, it looked as if the pirates were never going to make it through. Blaster shots were flying everywhere! A smaller pirate fell. While he was on the ground, he pulled out a Thermal Detonator and threw it at the soldiers.
"Watch Out!" exclaimed Treedo. It was too late. The grenade exploded and it took six soldiers with it. Right after the explosion, smoke came up making it hard to see. The Space Pirates entered the ship firing their blasters. One of them sliced a Republic Soldier with his Vibroblade.
The rest of the soldiers retreated. Now the only person left was Treedo. He used a force power on himself that absorbs blaster fire for a little amount of time. A pirate swung his Vibroblade at Treedo. He deflected it with one of his lightsabers and then cut off the man's head with the other one. Blaster shots were being shot at Treedo. He was deflecting them right back at the enemy. Then he used Force Push and knocked down three pirates.
The fight is a long one and Treedo is getting very tired. It looks hopeless. Finally, the rest of the Republic soldiers came to help out the Jedi. They started blasting the Space Pirates to the ground. Eventually, the enemy retreated into their vessel and took off. They were about to get away when some Republic Fighters came to the transport ship's aid! Blaster shots were seen flying across space. One of the fighters hit the vessel and it blew up into small pieces.
After the battle was over, everyone on the transport ship was celebrating. There was food and drinks that the people donated. The whole ship thanked Treedo for what he had done. Everyone arrived at Corellia safely!
(So, what did ya all think? Any good?)
