Undying
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Post by Undying on Sept 15, 2009 16:02:45 GMT -5
This is a timeline of a pilot RPG I'm working on. It's a demonstration of my skill with two-dimensional design. The text for the RPG is still in development, but it will be ready soon enough. Any feedback/constructive criticism would be great.
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Post by Coffinstuffer on Sept 16, 2009 11:43:25 GMT -5
Very professional looking.
Not sure how I feel about magic or souls in sci-fi, but vast-scale Kardashev Type III (or indeed IV, depending on who's definition one goes by) civilizations are always good in my books.
Interstellar frontierism - somehow 'Firefly' comes to mind. : P
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Post by Undying on Sept 16, 2009 15:08:33 GMT -5
That's my main stumbling block. In the later stages of the timeline, I have to combine cowboys with magic. It just doesn't compute.
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Post by triggerhappyjuliet on Sept 17, 2009 11:19:44 GMT -5
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*confused expression?*
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Post by Undying on Sept 17, 2009 11:40:56 GMT -5
Compute? It means work out in this sense. Magic and cowboys don't fit together.
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Post by triggerhappyjuliet on Sept 17, 2009 11:56:40 GMT -5
I know what compute means lol
That would be funny as h3!! though! Cowboys riding around on there horses, waving wands and casting spells and people and they herocially riding into the sun set. xD
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Post by Coffinstuffer on Sept 17, 2009 12:25:03 GMT -5
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Post by triggerhappyjuliet on Sept 18, 2009 11:40:35 GMT -5
Oh c'mon! You gotta admitt... That would own!
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Post by Undying on Sept 18, 2009 13:59:54 GMT -5
When you put two really cool things together, the end product has a tendecy to be not so cool. In the combination of cowboys and magic, the psychological phenomemon is apparent. This is the main reason why this RPG can't launch off yet.
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